My partner Doug pointed out a glitch in this: the poem is about "red" but one reference is "white-hot," which is a different color. You may want to revise that to some descriptions of "cherry" which is another of the standard colors recognized in smithcraft.
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Hmm...
Date: 2011-05-12 07:03 pm (UTC)